Friday, May 31, 2013

Flash Fiction Friday ~ Part One

He took off up the mountain to find her in the field of daisies. Her grey eyes saw prisms of light through wet lashes and a cast down sun on the boy's crinkled mouth and five o'clock shadow. "It's funny how I've never told you--", she whispered, shaking her head, 
but he always spoke too soon. 


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  1. Olivia HayesMay 31, 2013 at 3:00 PM

    =O HOW LONG DO I HAVE TO WAIT TO HEAR THE REST?!

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  2. LaceyMay 31, 2013 at 6:16 PM

    Oh my gosh!! This is so short but unbelievably captivating! Michelle!! I want to hear the rest too!! hahah!

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